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Tuesday, 16 June 2015

Letter for snow white

A letter for snow white
Dear Snow White I have just finished reading your story the story was good but I have some advise ,why did you eat the apple?Why did you believe that the strange was a old lady! You should don't open the door to stranger. Why did you go into the stranger’s house! When you were knocking on the stranger’s door I saw some houses beside the stranger house and maybe you can ask them is someone in the house and why did you sleep in there bed's you shouldn't sleep on there bed you need to wait there nicely and quietly until someone has arrived. When you were going to eat the apple you shouldn't believe that old lady . I think you shouldn't believe the old lady that who gave you the apple however I liked your story.
From Sleepy Dwarves


                         

                                       

   


                    
                                

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